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CHAPTER TWENTY-NINE

Neferet stepped from the shadows and into the gazebo, moving quickly to Heath and Erik. First, she touched Erik's face and checked the bloody slash marks on his arms from where he'd struggled futilely to try to pull the ghosts off Heath. As she passed her hands over his wounds I could actually see the blood drying. Erik breathed a sigh of relief, like his pain had disappeared.

Gee, guys, do you think his pain might have disappeared?

"These will heal. Come to the infirmary when we get back to school and I'll give you some salve that will lessen the sting from your wounds." She patted his cheek and he blushed bright red. "You showed the bravery of a vampyre warrior when you stayed to protect the boy. I am proud of you, Erik Night, as is the Goddess.”

Speaking of Heath, don’t you think his wounds might be a little bit more serious? Praise the boytoy later, go heal him!

 

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Final Count:

Speshul Snowflake: 256
Name Drop: 71
You Judgemental Bastards: 221

 

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CHAPTER TWENTY-EIGHT

"Heath! What in the hell are you doing here!”

Stalking you.

"Well, you didn't call me back.” Oblivious to everyone else, he hugged me. I didn't need the bright light of the moon for me to see his bloodshot eyes. "I missed you, Zo!" he blurted, wafting beer breath all over me.

You Judgemental Bastards: 213

There’s condescension written all over that last sentence.

"Heath. You need to go—”

"No. Let him stay," Aphrodite interrupted me.

Heath's gaze swiveled up to her, and I imagined what she must look like through his eyes.

Are you sure you’re straight, Zoey? Because you admire the ladies a dozen times more often than you admire the guys.

 

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CHAPTER TWENTY-SEVEN

"Nice dress, Zoey. It looks just like mine. Oh, wait! It used to be mine." Aphrodite laughed a throaty, I'm-so-grown-up-and-you're-just-a-kid laugh. I really hate it when girls do that. I mean, yes, she's older, but I have boobs, too.

Having boobs isn’t necessarily a sign of being grown up, you know. Some girls start to develop when their age is still in single digits. Also…

You Judgemental Bastards: 204

But oh, Aphrodite, don’t stop being awesome.

I smiled, purposefully putting an extra dose of cluelessness into my voice and launched into a gihugic lie,

STOP MAKING UP RIDICULOUS FUCKING WORDS!


…wow. Two paragraphs in and I’m already using capslock. That does not bode well.

which I think I pulled off pretty well considering I'm a bad liar,

You keep saying that; doesn’t mean I’m going to believe you.

I had just been attacked by a ghost, and everybody was staring at us and listening in.

Speshul Snowflake: 221

 

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CHAPTER TWENTY-SIX

If Skylar's hissing and growling hadn't caught my attention, I would never have seen Aphrodite slumped in the little alcove down the hall from Neferet's room.

Given how unobservant you are, I’m surprised even that caught your attention.

"What is it, Skylar?" I held my hand out gingerly, remembering what Neferet had said about her cat being a known biter.

Does anyone honestly believe that’s what’s going to happen?

I was also sincerely glad that Nala wasn't tagging long after me as usual—Skylar would probably eat my poor little cat for lunch.

I wish he would.

 

 

 

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CHAPTER TWENTY-FIVE

The next day started with what I looked back on later as suspicious normalcy. Stevie Rae and I ate breakfast, still whispering good gossip about how hot Erik was and trying to figure out what I'd wear on our date Saturday. We didn't even see Aphrodite or the hag triplets, Warlike, Terrible, and Wasp.

You Judgemental Bastards: 189

Lay off; they haven’t done a thing to you!

Vamp Soc class was so interesting—we'd moved from the Amazons to learning about an ancient Greek vampyre festival called Correia—that I'd stopped thinking about the Dark Daughters ritual planned for that evening, and for a little while I'd actually quit worrying about what I was going to do about Aphrodite.

Priorities. Zoey has them. OH, WAIT.

 

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CHAPTER TWENTY-FOUR

"That was truly the most prodigious circle-casting I've ever experienced!" Damien gushed after the circle had been closed and we were gathering up the candles and smudge stick.

Speshul Snowflake: 209

Look at that, Zoey casts circles better than the damn High Priestess herself. Is anyone honestly surprised? Because I’m not.

"I thought 'prodigious' meant 'big,' " Shaunee said.

"It also can show exciting wonder and can refer to something stupendous and monumental," Damien said.

"For once I'm not going to argue with you," Shaunee said, surprising everyone except Erin.

Because they share the same brain cell, you see.

 

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CHAPTER TWENTY-THREE

"I hope the rest of them can find it," I said, glancing around me while Stevie Rae and I waited by the big oak tree. "It didn't seem this dark last night.”

Breaking news: Zoey continues to have no faith in anyone, and no one was surprised.

"It wasn't. It's really cloudy tonight, so the moon's having trouble shining through.

How oblivious do you have to be to not notice the change in the weather?

But don't worry, the Change is doing really cool things for our night vision. Heck, I think I can see as good as Nala." Stevie Rae scratched the cat affectionately on her head and Nala closed her eyes and purred. "They'll find us.”

I leaned against the tree and worried. Dinner had been good— seriously yummy broiled chicken, seasoned rice, and baby snow peas (one thing I could say for this place, they could really cook)—yeah, everything had been great.

I don’t know how much I buy that, given that they apparently serve salad every day for lunch.

 

 

 

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CHAPTER TWENTY-TWO

"She has a point," Damien said.

"She joined the Dark Daughters," Shaunee said.

"What!" Damien squeaked, his voice going up about twenty octaves.

…is there a typo here? Was one of Damien’s lines supposed to be said by someone else? Because if not…he’s just as stupid as Zoey is. I mean, look at that. He’s like a Slowpoke; hit him over the head with something and it takes him a while to actually feel the pain. Except in this case, it’s tell him something, and it takes a while for it to sink in.

"Leave her alone," Stevie Rae said, instantly coming to my defense.



Zoey, call off your little attack dog. She’s not scary, she’s just pathetic.

 

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CHAPTER TWENTY-ONE

I really hope this phone call isn’t just PCK wanking over Zoey’s specialness some more…

"Hi Grandma, it's me.”

"Oh! My Zoeybird! Are you okay, honey?”

I smiled into the phone and wiped my eyes. "I'm good, Grandma. I just miss you.”

You know, when she can be bothered to remember you even exist.

"Little bird, I miss you, too." She paused and then said, "Has your mom called you?”

"No.”

 

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CHAPTER TWENTY

I was going to have to talk to Neferet. I thought about it as Stevie Rae and I rushed through breakfast the next morning. I didn't want to tell her anything about my supposed strange reaction to the elements—I mean, I hadn't been lying to Stevie Rae. I could have imagined the entire thing.

We all know you didn’t imagine it; stop the faux humility.

Speshul Snowflake: 160

What if I tell Neferet and she makes me take some kind of weird affinity test (in this school, who knew?) and she finds out that I don't have anything other than an overactive imagination? No way did I want to go through something like that.

Why? At least you would know for sure one way or the other. Your aversion to telling anyone anything just makes you look even more stupid than you already are.

 

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CHAPTER NINETEEN

My wrist was still tingling from Erik's totally unexpected kiss (and bite and lick),

Yeah, that’s still creepy.

and I wasn't sure I could speak yet, so I was relieved that there were only a few girls in the big entry room,

Because all of them would want to know every little detail about your evening, right? Tone down that ego a few hundred notches, would you?

and they did little more than glance at me before they went back to watching what sounded like America's Next Top Model.

Name Drop 62

 

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CHAPTER EIGHTEEN

"Are you okay?”

Do you really want me to answer that?

"Yeah, I'm okay. Totally. Fine." I lied.

"You don't look fine," Erik said. "Mind if I sit down?”

"No, go ahead," I said listlessly. I knew my nose was bright red. I'd definitely been snotting on myself when he walked up, and I had the sneaking suspicion he'd witnessed at least part of the nightmare between Heath and me.

Kayla? Kayla who?

 

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CHAPTER SEVENTEEN

Shakily, I wiped the back of my hand across my mouth and then stumbled away from the puke spot (I refused to even consider what I puked up and how it must have looked) until I came to a giant oak that had grown so close to the wall that half of its branches hung over the other side of it. I leaned against the tree, concentrating on not getting sick again.

What had I done? What was happening to me?

Then, from somewhere in the limbs of the oak I heard a meow. Okay, it wasn't really your normal, average, catlike meow. It was more like a grumpy, "me-eeh-ufme-eef-uf-snort.”

Oh, great. Even Zoey’s fucking cat is a Mary Sue. Because she can’t be your normal, average cat, can she? And what kind of a sound is that? That’s not a cat, it’s some kind of alien.

Maybe it’s the Thing, and we’ll get to see Zoey be gruesomely eviscerated!

 

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CHAPTER SIXTEEN

I have a bad feeling about this. I thought the last one was the Chapter That Wouldn’t End, but this one is even longer. I don’t know if I’m going to make it through alive…

"That's it." Stevie Rae had stopped, looking uncomfortable and apologetic in front of the steps that led to a round brick building situated on a little hill overlooking the eastern part of the wall surrounding the school.

Anyone want to explain why she looks apologetic? She’s acting like a dog preparing to be scolded for peeing on the carpet.

Huge oaks wrapped it in darkness within darkness, so I could barely make out flickers of either gas or candles lighting up the entrance. Not one speck of light was coming from the darkened windows that were long and arched and seemed to be made of stained glass.

If it’s so dark, how can you see that they’re stained glass?

 

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CHAPTER FIFTEEN

About halfway to Nyx's Temple I realized that Stevie Rae was being unusually quiet. I glanced sideways at her. Was she also looking pale? I got a creepy walk-over-your-grave feeling.

"Stevie Rae, is something wrong?”

Many things about this series is wrong, as a matter of fact.

"Yeah, well, it's sad and kinda scary.”

"What is? The Full Moon Ritual?" My stomach started to hurt.

My god, you’re such a pansy.

 

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CHAPTER FOURTEEN

Fencing was totally cool, which was a surprise. Class was held in a huge room off the gym that looked like a dance studio, complete with a floor-to-ceiling wall of mirrors. Hanging from the ceiling along one side were weird life-sized manikins

As opposed to ‘mannequins’. Seriously, PCK, who is your editor? Because they need to be boiled in oil.

that reminded me of three-dimensional shooting targets. Everyone called Professor Lankford Dragon Lankford,

Wow, that’s an awkward sentence.

or just Dragon. It didn't take me long to figure out why. His tattoo represented two dragons whose bodies, serpent-like, wrapped down over his jaw line. Their heads were over his brows and their mouths were open, breathing fire at the crescent moon. It was amazing and hard not to stare at. Plus, Dragon was the first male adult vampyre I'd seen up close. At first he confused me.

So what else is new? Zoey, you would be confused if someone told you the sun rose in the east. I’m starting to think your IQ is in the negative digits.

 

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CHAPTER THIRTEEN

I actually found my way to Lit class by myself.

What do you want, a medal?

Okay, so it was just on the other side of Neferet's room, but still I felt a little more confident when I didn't have to ask to be led around like the helpless idiot new kid.

Why would you have to ask? Everyone is already bending over backwards to accommodate you.

"Zoey! We saved a desk for ya!" Stevie Rae yelled the instant I got to class.

She was sitting beside Damien, and practically hopping up and down with excitement. She looked like a happy puppy again, which made me smile.

“Aww, isn’t she cute? Who’s a good girl? Who’s a good girl? You are!”

 

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CHAPTER TWELVE

"Zoey! Over here!”

I almost cried in relief when I heard Damien's voice and saw his hand waving at an empty desk next to him.

Just his hand; not the rest of his body or anything.

"Hi." I sat down and smiled gratefully at him.

"Are you ready for your first day?”

No.

I nodded. "Yep." I wanted to say more, but just then a bell gave five quick rings and as the echo of it died Neferet swept into the room. She was wearing a long black skirt slit up the side to show great stiletto boots, and a deep purple silk sweater. Over her left breast, embroidered in silver, was the image of a goddess with her arms upraised, hands cupping a crescent moon. Her black hair was pulled back into a thick braid. The series of delicate wavelike tattoos that framed her face made her look like an ancient warrior priestess. She smiled at us and I could see that the entire class was as caught as I was by her powerful presence.

PCK, you’re only fueling my belief that Zoey is deeply in love with Neferet. There’s absolutely no reason for her to pay this much attention to every little detail about someone unless she has the hots for them. I also think you’re projecting your lust for her onto the rest of the class. Not everyone is going to be as in awe of her as you are.

 

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CHAPTER ELEVEN

I didn't think I'd sleep. I figured I'd lay there and miss home

Why would you possibly miss home? You’ve made it more than clear that you hate everything to do with your home and your family, Miss I Hope They All Drown. Oh, yes, I remember that. If you want me to believe that you might miss them even a little, maybe you shouldn’t have spent all that time badmouthing them.

and think about the bizarre twist my life had taken.

Given how many vampires there are in the world, I would hardly say it’s a bizarre twist. Now, if you were turning into, say, a xenomorph, that would be bizarre.

Disturbing flashes of the guy in the hall's eyes drifted through my mind, but I was so tired I couldn't focus.

Translation: PCK are waving a giant flag and jumping up and down screaming “REMEMBER THIS FOR LATER!”

 

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CHAPTER TEN

"I keep thinking that hubris is eventually going to bring Aphrodite down," Damien said.

"Hubris," Stevie Rae explained, "having godlike arrogance.”

I kind of like it when things get explained to Zoey like the idiot she actually is. I also like that Stevie Rae apparently doesn’t have enough faith in Zoey’s so-called ‘intelligence’ that she automatically explains something without pausing to wonder if an explanation is truly needed.

Unless PCK are the ones who don’t have enough faith in us, the readers, and think that we’re the ones who needed the explanation. I’m going to go with the former, for the sake of my blood pressure.

"I actually know that one," I said, still staring after Aphrodite and her mob.

I’m not sure that two people can accurately be called a mob, but I suppose we have to do something to make her look threatening, since I still don’t know why everyone is so afraid of her.

“We just finished reading Medea in English class. It’s what brought Jason down.”

“I’d love to knock the hubris right out of her bobble head,” Erin said.

‘Bobble head’? What? If that was meant to be an insult, you missed the mark.

 

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